Candle and Wind {Septolet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Nov 15, 2006


Candle
Swaying by wind
Shuttering quietly.

Wind
Pursing candles
Chasing it around for fun.
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The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    This poem didn't do much for me. it wasn't very -not to be mean- poetic, and didn't display much emotion. i don't know. i just think it could have been done better. x3Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This piece was very nicely done. The form seems really interesting and fun. =P ..In my opinion, I thought you did a fantastic job at it, you created great imagery in such few words! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Ooh, I can really imagine the picture you created. Great job

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