I liked ur poem...can i just make one lil sujestion..i dont mean to b mean or anything..but i think it would have more meaning if u didnt put the lil english lesson underneith....ppl well me in particular..like to read poems and not have a lesson afterwards, poems should just b read and enjoyed doesnt matter wut kind of poem, just that some one took the time to write it..neways keep up the good work

Now this is much better than Wax Butterflies, I must say. Once again, you've done the style justice, surpassed it, even. I raise my hat to you (well, I would, were I wearing one).

Wow! You are truly amazing. I think that this is the best poem that I have read of yours. I love shakespearian poems/ sonnets. I also know that they are not easy to write. I have been trying to write one for months now, but i just can't get it right. lol. Everything about this poem was lovely and it has me looking forward to reading more of your work. 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

Ooo. I like this. It has a deeper meaning that I like a lot. A kind of dark meaning, but in a different way...if you understand what I'm trying to say. =P

I liked the style. I haven't seen many sonnets on this site, and I have always adored the Shakspearean style. It's original to his part, and it works out quite nicely. The flow was good, but I thought there was one line that was a little off. But no one's perfect. =)

One mistake I noticed:
[Nothing is perfect it does {proove},]
^^Correction: {prove}

Well done. I always love reading your poems, and I'm looking forward to commenting on some more. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Amazing!! Absolutely amazing...Everything was perfect except for the one little spelling mistake that Samantha caught-- This is definately 5/5 work! Keep it up, hun-

I like how you ended this. i just liked the topic all together! no critiques here, just praise and a 5/5~

I loved this.
I thought it was beautiful, and a terrific write.
Your imagery used in this was astounding.