by Daenerys Stormborn Nov 16, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I know this poem is long, but I put a lot of time into it...those who do read, please leave a comment. Thank you very much! |
by Anonymous
Great poem, read the whole thing. I know that took a lot of thought and time. Sometimes we're so blind about our selfishness that we can hurt others. |
Wow this one was great im glad i read this one too great job loved the last stanza as well as all the others |
Mimi, thanks for the criticism...I appreciate your honesty, but I am not sure exactly what you mean. Can you explain? Thanks Captive, I really appreciate the praise! :) |
by Mimi
I think you are trying to make too many points with one poem and its sort of confusing at the start. Maybe if you go back and look at it again it could be improved more. keep trying |