Really good...I liked it it had a lot of meaning. Made me sad to thinkin about parting with someone you really care about though...but keep it up!

Hello iv read ur story omg i wish i could date that boyfriend person. hes everything iv ever wanted!
id love to meet you on chat!!

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Man, I write stories...I have tons of them...but there is a difference between a story and a poem most of the time. I feel this 50-part "poem" is not right. I don't wish to be mean, but it's just NOT right!