Drayton

by Jerah Alaine   Nov 16, 2006


I want to be with you forever,
you to hold me tight in your arms.
lean forward and kiss my forehead,
as you tell me you love me.

i lye in my bed with tears rolling down my face,
trying to figure out where i went wrong.
you told me i was the one you truly loved,
then you found her and she took our love away.

we had something so special together,
our love was so strong.
did i do to much or maybe to little,
all i ever did was love you.

you decide to call me on a Friday night,
my heart did so many flips and jumps.
you call me and tell me you miss me,
you want to see me but as friends first.

you tell me all the things I've wanted to hear,
but at the same time i am so blind and naive.
why am i the one waiting to be taking back,
i always do just as you ask me to.

it had been about 8 months and everything was going okay,
i am talking to another boy now.
why couldn't you have said it sooner?
there are so many things standing in the way.

my heart is so confused,
I love you but then again i don't.
you have put me through so much,
but deep down you will always be in my heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start. Some things you can improve on is the transition between the stanzas especially between the 1st and 2nd stanzas. Also, try using more metaphors. Keep it up