by Lu Nov 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This poem has been inspired from the song |
by xXits meXx
I love this poem too...it hits very hard at home for me...you are a great writer..5/5 |
by Cindy
Luanne |
by ReBecca
I have a poem called "With this Crutch", that is also in honor of those less fortunate. I've read 3 of your poems now and they are all so purely felt. You get across what you want to say with great talent. |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice write. Very true. Unfortunately there are people in the world who are inconsiderate of others feelings or who simply just don't care. The last stanza is especially touching. |
by Letty
This is so beautiful. This poem really touched me. I always try to give a smile or a caring word to those that I know are in need of it and even to those that don't. that is just the type of person I am. I have seen a lot of what you described, people laughing at those that are unfortunate. I myself call it ignorance. Another great job done by you. You have put me to tears with this lovely poem. I don't think that I need to say more but 5/5 |