Wow that was a long poem but it made me want to cry and it kept me hooked great job im still in shock i feel like it happened to me and it was so nicely descripted!

WOW

that was great!! on the sad side of life, but really good you fealt like you was watching it and helpless to do anything.

I wee bit on the long side, but gripping

Great job!

5/5

I know its a bit long but i believe you'll be trapped in the words after the first 2 stanza's i'd had to be long to cover all the meaning of this poem

Omfg. that is so freakin sad. wow. yeah but its really good. it totally gave me the chills. comment minexxx
-kissy face elisa

You have great writing skills thanks for the comment. I know what that's like to be put in an abusive household nice job

Its pathetic that people can just say WOW thats a really good poem. Its more than a really good poem its reality for a lot of people and its sad, but alot of people will never be able to understand that. We need more people like you, writing poems like these and we need more understanding amongst people...

Nice poems

Hey boy i like this poem its sad but you did a very good job on it keep up the good work.

Wow that was really deep, i feel like i felt what she was feeling, your an awesome writer/poet. i like the way you descrbed it and everything, but it hurts that that's still happening now a days

Omg!!!
wow this poem is touching...It almost made me cry...well nice job!!
5/5
*thnx for the comment*

xXMeganXx

Wow, amazing poem hun. keep up the amazing work. =]

Wow. that made me wanna cry! its((sad)) awsome. i like how it was a story and everything fit together perfectly! keep it up!

=]
MelodyQueen

Omg! that poem was so sad and deep but really good it made me wanna cry
i loved it. 5/5

I can relate to this, greatly.

Omg ... its rele awesome ... it a little long ...but great...keep it on ..

Omg... thts the best poem i have ever read its long but its meaningful

That is one poem i can kind of relate to.

I agree with Bonnie. It's an amazing poem, I love it.

I was completely in a trance then, I could not look away from the screen. Your work is absolutely awesome!! Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Very powerful! Reminds me of an actual domestic violence case in my hometown a few years ago. Nice job.