Wow!! this deffinately deserves 5/5!! I AM LIKE AMAZED!!
very good

check mine out too
thanks

BRITTANY GILBERT

WOW.
This was excellent.
I loved it.
The flow, imagery, rhyme scheme, imagery-it was all amazing.
This has to be one of my favourite poems I have ever read.
A well deserved 5/5

Oh wow. Sometimes I have trouble focusing on long poems- but not this one. Not this one at all. A few of the rhymes were a bit off, but still stunning. Very very vivid images too. *shudder* Hehe.

Aww wow this is really sad and i can relate to most of it. you did an amazing job on writing it. it was full with so much emotion. but next time don't write a poem so long or make it into 2 cause it took forever to read lol. but great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Good thing her mother is a nurse
He let go and walks away
And prays to God
Under Gods embrace

wow, is this true? propably not, but even so, its an excellent poem, a real good write! you did a terrefic job! wow

Narc xxx

I seriously had tears in my eyes Karl!

Wow. I'm speechless. You are a great poet! 5/5

Amazing... absolutley amazing. I got a sick feeling at the bottom of my stomach after reading this. Had the urge to cry going for me too. You really pulled me into this with everyline, it just flowed right into the next heartwrencher. You are a great writter. 5/5

marcella

That poem... was touching. It made me cry. It reminds me of my own Father, in a way. Wow.

Good poem