by CondescendingHeart Nov 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Her heart beats faster, |
I like this poem MUCHO!! .. lol :P .. again perfect flow and rhyme.. no wonder you placed in my contest.. not one of your poems have even been slightly off amazing.. (BTW these are the comments for placing) |
by Midnight Sun
That definately kept my attention. You lead from one stanza to the other very smoothly and yet still left us wanting more. Great job! |