My version of humpty dumpty

by Emma Brown   Nov 16, 2006


Humpty dumpty sat on a chair.
Humpty dumpty sat on the floor.
He will get you if you are naughty
And you will not be naughty anymore.

Humpty dumpty stood in the hall.
Humpty dumpty sat on the stairs.
He will lie under your bed if you are naughty
And he will pull out all your hairs.

© Emma Brown

Comments and votes appreciated.
Much love, Emma xox

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I guess I just prefer the original. This didn't make much sense...I think it could have been a lot better. But keep trying out different ideas. Feedback like the ones your getting one of the ways to help you grow.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brianna

    Hahaha cute poem♥

    -bRiAnNa♥

  • 18 years ago

    by LiveForHim

    Ummmm...it was good but for some reason i didnt get it???(^_^)

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Haha... thats kinda funny.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, i HAVE to tell this to my little cousins. See if i can get them to be good when i'm babysitting them. =)
    Great poem!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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