Umm...i would say that is good except for the facts you ketp putting "Oh" i think it was too much and like it didn't sound right when reading and with your moral point of this poem but besides that its good nd cute...4/5

Umm... I think the previous commentator kinda missed the point of the context you chose for the repetitions. Could be wrong...

Anyway, this was a very sweet and short poem that I am sure you enjoyed writing. But frankly it doesn't stand out from any of the other love poetry on here, and it lacks the fire of truly passionate love poetry.

Stick at it. :-)

This was a nice poem!
really enjoyed reading it...
the flow was good... not bad...
it was well written...
the person you wrote it to... is a lucky person :)

keep it up!

Nicely penned love poem with great emotion, great job. 5/5

This is another great poem, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I feel the love in this poem lol

I enjoyed this, I found it really sweet and the love shone through the words.

Again, I liked the imagery and wording, I found the flow a little jumpy in places, but apart from that, I enjoyed it very much.

Amazing poem of love right here. very well emotional to put into words. very amazing your very talented. but you did mess up on something && i just wanted to point it out.

"All I wont in this world is your love"
should be
"All I WANT in this world is your love"
not won't. =]

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

Youre a great writer. Keep it up...

This poem is very nice good work

Aww i understand COMPLETELY where you are coming from (:

Aww i understand COMPLETELY where you are coming from (:

All I wont in this world is your love,
And you to be there for me when the times are ruff,
`All I want
ruff = rought

Okay, so some of the repitition worked . Some of it didn`t . I wish you would use metaphors or something sometimes when expressing feelings in these poems ): It kind of feels like you`re repeating the same things over & over again .
But overall, nicely written .
..__MiNDYY

I agree with mindy some of seemed that you repreated things over and over again. but that is alright, again use synonyms and read the punction you use. other that that this was pretty good, but its just not my thing sorry dear 4/5