I really like this. Its short yet very meaningful. So much meaning and emotion fills the lines. The usage of words was GREAT! and it had an excellent flow through it. Its so short, and the message of it is sraight to the point - i like that alot about it. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more! xx

Wow.. i really like this.. short and simple words.. but still strong.. the emotion was great and expressed really well considering you only had a couple of short lines.. also the rhyme was spectacular .. great job!

This also is a great yet sad poem. made me wanting more. i just wanted to keep on reading and reading, great job

5/5 David

This was a deep and heartfelt poem it had a lot of meaning and i liked it 5/5

This was amazing by far the best poem I have read tonight. the flow was flawless, the imagery vivd and the emotion was deep. again another job well done, on such a dark peice.5/5