Wow,that was super deep and powerful.amazingggg job!
thanks again for joining my fiesta =]
--lexie

I like this one also .... the words you use are heavy and i can feel the emotion and the feeling of this poem ..

Wow.. i have goosebumps.. GREAT JOB!! the emotion in this is just over the top .. you have a way with words!

Wow.. really great job.. the only suggestion is that weakend is spelled wEEkend

Oh man im so stupid.. weekend.. are you kidding me im soo dumn.. you meant weakened your correct im soo sorry.. lol like more week.. haha MY BADDS!

This is so good! there's so much flow of emotion and everything!
you're in my favorites!
thx so much for the comments, they mean soooo much to me,
luv gabriella

Mistakes and bad decisions of our past sometimes come back and haunt us and change the way we think/feel but we have to move nice job 5/5

Wow this is really good. it's a different topic i'm not use to reading, so it made me like it even more. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Oh wow. It's so simple and flowing. It just draws you in. OMG, where do you get it all? Kudos again :D

It reminds me how regretting one's past mistakes and failures through bad decision-making can prolong one's misery. This piece was, once again, written and presented rather well and sound. A delightful read, nonetheless. 5/5 ~Marian