Thats pretty good, I like the flow. The only, thing i didn't quite like was the last line. It just seems a might to long. But other than that awesome, and you know we cant be perfect so im not gonna sweat over somethig small like that

A perfect poem, with a great word choice, i like it alot, keep up the great work like always.... 5/5

Very beautiful. Great message to get through. Very well written too!
Well done! God Bless.

Taylor

I like it. You did a good job on it. I really don't know what to say about it. You don't need to fix anything with it, that's for sure. This piece is perfect just as it is.

>black&&blue

5/5, keep up the good work. Great word choice.