by Nobodys Hero
Good poem! |
by DarkJem
Um well it's good but not my sort of thing sorry bro, but don't be discouraged it was only your 1st one. |
What do u call that are u gothic or soming bro or are you just saying it dur |
Your getting better |
by ellewen
Okay, for a little boy with an imagination this is pretty good. But if you want to be known as more then that I would suggest writing about something that everyone else can relate to. That is the key to attracting an audience. So write upon expeirience, and see what you find. I am a little surpprised at your vocabulary though. I have 3 little brothers, and a little sister (2 are twins) and they are 13, 13, and 11, im nor sure about the other one lol but they are what your poem reminds me of. I do have a couple suggestions though if you are interested? |