Sweet Revenge

by xxxslash616xxx   Nov 16, 2006


He held her down, and took her innocence.
He was so kind, in all she could reminisce
She wondered how, he could be so cruel.
She wondered how, she could be a fool.
Her thoughts now, turned from sorrow to malice.
She would punish him, for being so calice.
She throws him off, then she grabs the knife.
Starting to cry, shes going to end his life.
Stabbing him once, the over and over again.
With his last breath, her new life will begin.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it was so angery and powerful.
    I really enjoyed the wording, it was a pleasure to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Just. Plain. Lovely.
    Like the rest of your work, fantastic! Another five from me. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
    "Peace out, boy scouts, there's bed-bugs about!"

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    Well, the guys dead, so I doubt it's you. Eh.
    I love when people write poems like this. It makes me cry, but it just means a lot, eh. :|

    A great poem. ( They all deserve to die )

    5/5

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