Don't Cry Young Girl

by Lil Miss Nothing   Nov 16, 2006


Pull the trigger there it goes,
Blood all over her Sunday clothes.
You'd never think such a girl,
Would want to end her life in this world.
All those things you've done to her,
Knowing death has no cure.
Why the tears, why the screams,
You broke her heart you stole her dreams.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    So much meaning packed into such a small poem but sometimes short and sweet is all u need 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Great poem. tragic yet profound and brilliant xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    I agree with the person who wrote above me that was really awesome!!i loved it and im hard to please im picky with poems

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    I really like this poem, it was so short, but there was so much meaning packed into it.

    the rhyming wasn't forced at all, except for the line where you used "cure".

    "Why the tears, why the screams,
    You broke her heart you stole her dreams. " these were my favorite lines, and i just love them so much. excellent job, 5;5

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