I really like this poem, it was so short, but there was so much meaning packed into it.

the rhyming wasn't forced at all, except for the line where you used "cure".

"Why the tears, why the screams,
You broke her heart you stole her dreams. " these were my favorite lines, and i just love them so much. excellent job, 5;5

I agree with the person who wrote above me that was really awesome!!i loved it and im hard to please im picky with poems

Great poem. tragic yet profound and brilliant xx

So much meaning packed into such a small poem but sometimes short and sweet is all u need 5/5 good job