Dark omen

by Brittany C   Nov 16, 2006


Sweeping across the sky,
High above,
The lone crow circles,
Like a impending doom,
From the depths of hell,

You run,
Trying to hide,
From the fate that is to come,
But when you think that you are free,
There was the crow,
Flying high,

Staring down at you,
With mocking eyes,
As you stumble and fall,
Now its too late,
There is no escape,
Now you are falling,
Into the swirling depths of hell.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This is dark, and well written. I liked the use of black crow, as a dark future. You did an excellent job on this one. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by playful_wants_elisabeth

    I love this one, i like dark poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.

    The imagery was fantastic, it blew me away.

    My favourite part was the last stanza.

    A beuatiful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "Omen" .. not "Oman"..

    It was an ok poem, good detail.. imagery was ok. I'm sure you can write better. Keep trying!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    To be a non rhymed poem it was great, 5/5!!!

    Bryan,

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