by Lindsay Nov 16, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
(( I didn't know if I was allowed to post a short story or not, so I did anyways. Please inform me if this is not allowed)) |
I lovedt he decscription and imagery in this short story. It was really intresting and i did want to read more and moreo f it as it went along. There was emotion in it and that made it really cool. I have to say i really did enjoy it. You captured me and made me want to read mroe and more. An excellent read! Keep writing and thanks for your ocmments! xx |
by Goran Rahim
Great job, and you can make a great poem out of this, if u want to, 5/5 |
by Kristina
Wow this is reallly good. i defiantly like it a lot. it's full with soo much emotion. great job! 5/5 |
by SCARECROW
So good, so good. Have you considered LiveJournal? It's much better equipped for stories, and you could just post the link here, ne? Still, 't'was awesome, and I really loved it. 5 from me ^^ |
by N M Lambert
Great imagry. you paint a powerful picture with your words. x |