by N M Lambert
What a brilliant poem, this really touched me .xx |
Ok danielle....love the poem...always will....KEEP WRITING!!! |
by Kenzie
This obviously holds a ton of emotion. i've felt that same way. it's a really good poem, but i think if you spent more time on it, you could make it even better by maybe rewording or editing some spots just for better overall flow. i really love this poem tho. great job |
Its awesome, I'm sure we've all been there or will all be there, so don't give up hope there will be that one there sometime. And I'll threaten him with the friend talk. lol |