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by xXxDarkDreamerxXx Nov 16, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Till this day i will never say... All the pain and hate that has taken away my faith And now I'm filled with rage and trapped inside an iron cage. Held back by thick chains that bind me and make my go insane. Till this day i will never say.. That when you see my smile it only lasts a little while And that deep down inside where my soul slowly dies... I'm hiding all my pain trying so hard to stay sane. But the dark is calling out my name.. wanting me to come out and play a game.. Till this day i will never say.. to you my close friends that my beginning is my end My tears are now red that stain the floor as i read That my dreams will never be for theres nothing left for me Till this day i will never say..
by IdTakeABulletForYou
Wow. I love the words, i love the rhyming scheme. I love the couplets that make up the poem rather than the usual four verse... it's unique. Nice write... 5/5 ~Stevie
by jason
Its really good i love this poem = )
by DarkJem
Great :) keep up the good work