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  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Looks like i'll just have to give you a five again lol i love the last 4 and a half lines starting at life has it's own deck. it's so true that in life we all get dealt certain cards, some have good hands others not so good. but it's all about the poker face and what you do with your hand. two people with identical hands in life may play the wrong cards at the wrong time and watch the chips slip into the hands of somebody else o so true 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nicole

    My poem, this one actually is being published in "immortal versus" this year