Wow, I really liked this, it was really amazing how well it was written. (Not that your not good or anything lol) And I can relate to so much too, and the last verse was really good.

'But the best synonym of all is a scratched cd.
because even now,
after all this time,
everytime I see, hear or think about you,
My heart skips a beat.'

Amazing, really. Keep it up!

Hey, You commented me AGES ago, I haven't been on in ages! I like this one, its a talent you certainly have,
Awesome work
Greta