Beautiful....maybe you could give this to him...this is very descriptive and it lays alot of your feelings down about it...if he cares he'd try...keep it up!!

xox
Ally

Fantastic, I couldn't praise you more. I love your choice of words, and the flow was delicate, and smooth. Lovely piece, well done! 5 from me.

Awesome job hunn. The flow was excellent and so was your choice of words. If this is all true, how about showing him this poem? That might work. 5/5

>black&&blue

Wow. this is such a well written poem! the lines:

For I know that no boy can ever be happy with this girl you see?
No boy will ever be happy with a girl like me

just struck me like a dagger. woww just wowww.

Aww. that was so sad hun! :( chin up

much love and many kisses,
bex