I enjoyed reading this poem a lot because it's true. You should always try to have an optimistic outlook on life and I think that is something important to be able to have the "The Time of Your Life". :)

Don't give up for life is just a test
to see if you have what it takes.
Life won't be perfect and all that
for you can't help your mistakes.

^ By far my favorite stanza. I think it's because I can relate to this one a lot because I have made my fair share of mistakes in life so far and I'm still a teenager! :) Lol, anyway, I really did like the point of this poem that you were trying to get across. Great flow and choice of words too! :) Loved it. Keep writing. 5/5

Stephanie

Even better than the Greenday song!
"A wish and a dream aren't your goal
There's a symbol of what you want.
They can come true if you try,
but you CAN'T give up on life."
I LOVE THIS POEM! It's one of those rare pieces that gives you the warm-fuzzy-feeling-I've-gotta-go-out-do-something-righteously-inspirational kinda poems. 5 from me, and again AWESOME WORK! *prances around throwing confetti*

-Smiles-
I like this poem, a lot.
I love inspirational poems though.. :]
So, this was .. Yet, another great poem. :]

Hun, Keep up the amazing writing. :]

5/5.
God Bless.