by TheRevelation Nov 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You look at me with a smile I smile back, |
by dora
You're very creative when it comes to the words u use in ur poems. this was very well written. xx |
G00D J0B BABE! L0L, KEEP iT UP! |
by *Charisma*
Thanks for the very nice comment on my poem! I thought certain lines in this were a little childish...but I did like these two lines a lot |