Thanks for the very nice comment on my poem! I thought certain lines in this were a little childish...but I did like these two lines a lot

I can`t keep crying myself to sleep,
For you can`t always have my heart to keep.

Those were really good! keep that up!
Charisma*

G00D J0B BABE! L0L, KEEP iT UP!

[{[{SHELBY}]}]

You're very creative when it comes to the words u use in ur poems. this was very well written. xx