Aww..your so emo...lol...jk jk..i liked it...perty..perty cool....CYA LATER...love you

I liked the idea of the bullet with her name being the last thing in his head...very creative and original.

Wooo!
Finally you wrote a poem!
Kool Poem!
Really great..
Nice flow,
Nice rhythm n rhyme!
All round good job! as always [5/5]

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`*-Tormented

Beautifull written poem, It is great to seen an man write about his heart being broken it is not always the women. great poem. well done...

DAVID!!!! My fluck!!! That was Uh.maze.ing.!! I loved it!!!! It made me wanna cry!!!! This is ONE of your best ones!!! You're getting better at this, man. Lol. Never stop!!!! Love youuu!!! Ttyl!

-Liz

Aww that was really nice

Wow love he ending esp. you also have so many twist in ur styles..it keeps ur reading wanting to read moreand more.

lissa

Great poem

Sad poem, but very deep, 5/5