Amazing!

Another Great Poem.
It was really good.
Not your best, but it was still great. :]]

Keep Up The Outstanding Work. :]

5/5
God Bless.

I lived this life so far by myself.

^^ I think you should add "have" in before "lived". I just have a feeling it would sound better.

Because all you do is tell a lie.

^^ "Tell a lie" doesn't really make sense. Try "Because all you do is lie"

This was a good poem, its definetely something I can relate to. I actually have a poem called "I do not need you" Lol. The flow was good as were the descriptions. I found the part about not needing her a little repetative, maybe cause you said it so many times. Try adding some new information or descriptions in instead. Nicely done though 5/5

Hmmm,
i like your poem cus in every poem you have a great message to give out, in your every singel poem you have something that really touch your writers, and that is what i like about ur poems,
in this one i really luv this stanza

I'm not going to hide under a rock,
Nor will I hide behind a wall.
I'm not going to hide under the bed
and cry until my heart starts to fall.

it shows your strong personality that can fight against the vain ppl in our world.at least from my point of view, great job once again..........5/5

Wow. As a reader I can tell that you put some very strong emotions into this poem. I can relate to this poem in a lot of ways in my life so far. Great flow and great choice of words.

I'm not going to hide under a rock,
Nor will I hide behind a wall.
I'm not going to hide under the bed
and cry until my heart starts to fall.

^ My favorite stanza, by far. Loved it! :) It made your real true personality shine through and it made the reader think that you are a very strong person in the world.

You're a fantastic writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This wasnt the best poem ive seen, but it was alright. it seemed like a rhyming poem, and there were two stanzas that didnt rhyme at all. the flow could use a little work as well. also, try to use punctuation for words that can be misunderstood as something else (i.e. were, we're..... 2 completely diff meanings)
4/5 for this one
Emily

Oh my goodness... that poem was GREAT!!! i totally get that fealing.... keep on writing!!

This poem really reminds me of me and this one girl I know. I might just have to read her this one day!! Haha.. Good job on this. =]

>black&&blue

It is great to read poetry with heart felt emotion,again I hear the words well spoken,,,a choice is made with courage. I like it

Very good poem. keep up the good work.5/5

Nice! I love it.

Again another poem thats excellent. You really do write some great stuff!

I can really relate to this poem. I only wish it were so easy to give up on someone who has hurt you so many times. :(

Another amazing poem. Your work is somewhat inspiring. Good luck in the future.

Wow this is soooo good I loved it thx for the comment on mine too!! Youre realy saying wat u mean!