Black Reflection

by Bloody Chocolate x Hopeless Romantic   Nov 17, 2006


She looks in the mirror
what does she see?
a stupid smile
fake as can be

a single tear down her cheek
she knows no one cares
she knows shes nothing
but still shes there

she grabs her blade
and starts to draw
on her skin
her skin with no flaws

she draws a picture of her life
a bloody picture to represent her lies
tears fall to the ground
like words to a crowd

they go unnoticed
uncared for, ignored
she cant wait till morning
because then she will feel no more

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  • 18 years ago

    by ellewen

    Welcome to the site!!! I'm new too. I have been here a week. I reallllly like this poem!! One, because it is very visual and two, because I can deeply relate. Keep up the good work! And I would appriciate it if you returned the favor.
    ~skittles

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow. Can relate in many ways to this one. Are you a cutter? Kind of personal question and if you don't want to answer it then you don't have to. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up. You had a great flow and your choice of wording was good. 5/5

    WELCOME TO THE SITE!!! :)

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That is awesome n soo sad...

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Whoa, sorry about that... >.>

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