I luv this its funny but true 5/5
that happens to me all the time lol n now i g2g get stupid surgery becoz i was born with crappy teeth lol
well i really luvd this 1 keep it up

Haha thats awsome soo soo very true too nice flow yo lol i gotta get my wisdom teeth out so that should be fun

"And what about the lady
who stabs and pokes your teeth
it's almost like she's trying
to see whats underneath"

hehe, that stanza made me laugh out loud.
It was brilliant! Got the dentist spot on!
5/5
*Gem*

Funny and cute i like it

Hahaha, this gave me the giggles, I thought it was excellent and true.

This is so true... actually had a dentist who stabbed my gums and they started to bleed like crazy!! but nice job its funny!!

Awesome. hilarious. and every word of it-true! i'm finding all these wierd connections to your work. i also have a poem titled 'the dentist'. if you ever read it, you'll find that it's pretty different from this. once again, you have written an excellent poem. "mad skills" and a devotion to the essense of poetry! you rock, big time. :) -beav

Reading this humorous piece amuses me thoroughly. I regularly visit my dentist after every 15 days has passed to, once again, tighten up the hold of my braces. Thus my correlation with this poem. Your annoyance is completely evident, and the way you've written this in a grimly manner is entertaining....very nice write, indeed. ^_^ Debbie

Lol....this one was cool...awesome...lol...i really loved this 1...soo funny...lol..positive..n true!
Kp writing!
another 5/5
xxPoojaxx

I really enjoyed the humor off this poem and I'll probably think about it next time I'm at the dentist. ^.^ This was really creative and flowed nicely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Haha very cute
I too hate the dentist
and all these things are so true
they really have no business in your mouth lol
nice job once again

Haha. Cute poem. :]
I loved it.
I hate the dentist as well.
I loved how you wrote this, cute.
Great flow too, and wording.
5/5

It was really interesting,the feelings you get out and 'the woman'...lol
But I hated the fact that my dad is a dentist and far away from the figure you made here
It was an enjoyable read
Have funny days,
Laura

This mad me smile... funny and true well done

Haha this poem was cute. It sounded just like something you'd find in one of those children's poetry books. I loved it, it was funny and quite entertaining 5/5

Haha this poem was cute. It sounded just like something you'd find in one of those children's poetry books. I loved it, it was funny and quite entertaining 5/5

LOL The beginning was so funny! My first time to the dentist was annoying, I got scared because of the drills but I wasn't worst than my big bro. 5/5

Hahah this is funny..

"Don't you lie to me I'm the boss".

i love that line. haha.. very nicee and very truee.. excellent job once again =]

Thanks i needed that
5/5
Sam Mayo

Hahah, well that definitly made me laughhh... great work, and that is definitly dentists for ya haha... 5/5 from me, and keep up the great workk

what can i say, your pretty amazingg
xoSaraa