Thank you... I will edit

Brilliant. I loved the old English language as it made the poem sound more weighty like it was coming from a great tome. I loved the mathematical twist that really added depth and an almost puzzling quality to the poem.

This poem is very inspirational!!

I wasnt very fond of it when I started reading, but then poof! I was caught by an unexpected flow! Ilove it very much, now that I have read it through. However, I wouldent have written it in old engish. You get a 5 from me on this one!

Very, very, very beautiful poem! I must say that was some very nice way of words you used there. Very unique of writing of proper words. Very well written indeed. Keep up the great work.
5/5 God Bless.

~*Tay*~

Wow, another wonderful poem by a great poet. exellent work

I love this poem.. It was very thought provoking and so original. The flow and rhythm was perfect along with your word choice. My favorite part would have to be the last two lines. Great job on this! 5/5

I have never seen a poem about this topic before. It was great. i loved it!

Beautiful poem. I loved the language, and I love the ideas. It's true we all have ancestors, and it's very interesting to find out where we came from and who is our direct bloodline. Was my family of nobility to the thrown? Perhaps forgotten kings and queens lost in civil war? Inventors? .. I really enjoyed this poem. I love history, so thinking back to the past is something I do often. Nicely done.