As always, your poem leaves me speechless. Indescribably beautiful, the words you write have a meaning all their own. Just fantastic. ^^

Beautitful. Truly is the presence. Well done

Love Niquee

Really great poem :)keep up the good work

Very good descriptions .
Painted a picture in my head .
I don`t know what to say .
Just another very good write .
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Lovely rhymes Noni..
Good description too.

This poem made a picture in my mind. From word to word. You did a great job writing this. The flow was excellent. Keep it up!

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