How Could I Ask For More?

by Shae   Nov 17, 2006


Through all these dreams,
and long traveled roads.
Your the one I've been looking for.
Those eyes,
they glow with love.
Your the one I want to stay.
Baby, your my dream come true.
How could I ask for more?

Shae
September '06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awwww very sweet poem about someone you love. it's really beautiful. it flowed nicely together too. nice job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, this was so0o sweet.
    It was very short, but I think that made it more powerful because of your choice of words in this one.
    I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    I like this one ... but i think you could get your point across with stronger words and more attudite ... but dont just take my opinion ...

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