by Karl Wild GG23 Nov 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
In a dark alley he cries |
by Aveena
This is really powerful ! you portrayed what really happens out there.. |
by Jessica
This is amazing, it has a wonderful flow, I Just love it. |
by Cassie Cain
Good poem |
This poem is so amazing you captured each word and each word fit in perfect place |
by beav
When poetry is as filled with passion as yours, i look past grammer & spelling crap. this one embodies such resilience. it's very sad, but like your others it contains triumph. you must be an optimist. i also hope this wasn't you! if it was, i'd say you've done well! a thousand thanks for your comments! you rock. 5 (of course)! -beav |