Non-existant

by Mark   Nov 17, 2006


He looked at a girl one day,
She caught a glimpse of his eye,
She didn't appeal to him at all,
So he never even said 'Hi'.

After a week, she tried to get my attention,
So many ways, she had failed,
But after some months,
This still prevailed.

She felt let down, and became sad,
And she realised what she wanted most,
She couldn't have as to him,
She was like a ghost.

So she just gave up,
He didn't care at all,
Because through his eyes,
She didn't exist at all.

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She doesn't find out why he avoids him in this poem as it remains a mystery. It's left up to the reader to make an ending in their own mind.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I like how you make the reader think about it...very very good job...but would you mayb still make a sequel?

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like this, but i finished reading it wondering why he had no interest in her. Maybe it could have another stanza explaining why? I don't know, just a suggestion. I like this though, because it is unique. I don't think i've read a poem before like this. Good work. Keep it up. =]

    Tammie

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