Yeah its Love Forever And Always :), at start i wondered why you had 4 lines, then 7 then 3 then 6 lol..

Its absoloutly AMAZING, emotion is wonderful, the words... so beautiful..

5/5 Lovely write as always..

~[AnotherDream]~

Awwww this poems great, i got the same message as the person above,

your structure is rather wierd but it works so yeh =]=]=]=]
som much feeling and emotion woo!
love love x x x x

:)) you dont write bad poetry do you Gemma? :)) I dunno about always, it takes two for forever, in my expierence ive almost given up all together on the concept of love sounds good on paper tho. "Forever and always" One can only wish. Well dont Gemma its fantastic as always :))

I have a guess about what it is about... Is it about marriage?.... Well anyways... It was good, great job 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

Hidden message....yes i think u r in love... :o))

Great write indeed

all the best and take care

Cute poem. loved how you kept it rhyming the whole way! good job!
Charisma*

Awesome and i spotted te message before i got done reading it..ohh i feel special ahha. anyways aweoms e i loved it very touching :) :)

"Always showing the other they care, their
Love shines as bright as the sun"

Sweet as always! I love it soo much!

I bet you know how I feel when I say that even though me and Jake have been going out for little more than a week I've fallen in love...I guess love at first sight...

Great poem 5/5 as always
xoxo

Aww, I love this poem!!! It's awesome! Thanks for it! It's a 5/5 for sure!!!
*Just Lisa*