Once again i luv it lol, well right now were i am its pitch black outside :) keep it up

I think this is a relaly cute poem.. but the flow gets a little pbumpy at parts... its about a 4 our of 5 put i voted a 5 anyway! =)

I get like this alittle sometimes. you just gotta find time to yourself for those feelings to come out sometimes. but good stuff. :)

That was very good you proved guyz have a sensitive side!

I really luved this poem.....it really showed how I sometimes feel.....and that guyz hav a sensitive side :}

I like the way you described how it feels and the pressures guys have in the world of hiding their feelings. Honestly I think its ok for a guy to cry But great poem keepit up hit me back

That was awesome! This is the first poem I've read of yours, and I must say it's given me a lot of incentive to read a lot more. Really loved it! It was emotional and sensitive while still being masculine. Wonderful job, keep it up and I'll definately keep reading! 5/5!
~Midnight Sun

Unusual..a bit repetitive at the beginning, but an overall nice write with an understandable message.
Charisma*

Awwww i love how you express yourself

Sometimes i wish it would rain and wash all the pain away.... u are very tallented. =]

love,
MelodyQueen

Its awsome :)) loved it :))

Awh now I wish it would rain so I can cry the tears this bought to my eyes. It was beautiful. No one should have to hide their tears. Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Beautiful Poem. Such A Nice Flow. Great Job..:)

I liked this, it made me think of an old msn name I used to have 'I like walking in the rain because nobody can see my tears.'
I thought the flow was okay, but a little off in some places.
Apart from that, it was a beautiful piece about hidden pain.

I loved it all the way! This poem was perfect! Love it soo much!

I really like this poem.
It shows that guys have feelings too.
Really good poem.

xoCourtneyLynnxo

Wow you do have mad skills with a pencil, keep writing i like what i have read so far. thanks for your comments on mine to by the way.

I guess you should move to seattle, lol, no i'm only kidding, what you've said in this poem is all so true! excellent job!

It is okay to cry. Was it a girl that made you want to cry? If so, it is good for us girls to know that it happeneds to guys aswell. i love this. I could totally relate because I don't cry at all. but there is this boy that I really like, even after 5 days of dating, and he makes me wants to cry so much. but I can't because I don't want people to see me. I can see why you love the rian. I love it there to. I can dance and cry at the same time in front of my friends and everyone, including the boy.

Martina.xo♥

It is okay to cry. Was it a girl that made you want to cry? If so, it is good for us girls to know that it happeneds to guys aswell. i love this. I could totally relate because I don't cry at all. but there is this boy that I really like, even after 5 days of dating, and he makes me wants to cry so much. but I can't because I don't want people to see me. I can see why you love the rian. I love it there to. I can dance and cry at the same time in front of my friends and everyone, including the boy.

Martina.xo♥