Wow.

truly amazing.

Nice. i picked this one because the title is the same as one of my favorite song by The Temptation's. after reading the poem- i wondered, is Karl a Tempt's fan too? if you have never heard the song i'm talking about- you must! anyway- i liked this. for some reason i had a sunny rainy day pictured. because there is a certain confidence in this poem. there is a big positive aspect in it. it's not on the surface, though. there is a hope. very appealing to the senses. excellent! 5 for Karl. -beav i hope my comments aren't too weird! :)

Good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

Good poem

Touching, actually, with a creative, ending. To be truthful, the ending is probably my favorite part. I love how it's a twist, and is in a different tone than the rest of the poem, yet still manages to fit in so well. Very nice. Creativity is definitely not your downfall.
5/5.