Comments : Taken For Granted

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Lmfao that was well class i were wonderin if it were about that and it was haha lol ur gerrin good at these kinda poems now yup yup =]=]
    love love
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gul

    It was a great poem.
    Can you make a poem about a girl and a boy is total upsesst with him, tsking pics of her in his cell phone and tells people that they are dating even though they are not. And even though she tells him to just stop, he keeps on doing it and doing it again and again. Can you write a poem about the girl and how she would feel because I feel the same way right now! PLEASE!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    This one made me smile :)
    must admit its the first time in two weeks, so thank you :))

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really cool, so true...we take such spl things of life for granted....but if i relate this poem with the other one (forever)....are you in love with your chair?? :o)

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Hehe, Gem there is no way to explain how great ur poems are, only one word comes to mind every single time i read one.. which is 'Amazing'

    Great write and i know there will be alot more :) 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Ha Ha. Gemma your poem just made me choke on me tea! This poem is funny. I liked it very much.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wowo i started thinking it was a chair then a guy dn it was a chair..very mysteriously misleading haha nice job lol lol and funni

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lmao, that was soooo funny! I loved it! It has such good rhyming and flow! I thought it was a guy but the last line really made everythign clear! lol Loved it!
    xoxo