Ive actually done that....your poem is very sad.....but i loved it i read it like 6 times lol well keep it up!

Alright, this is my story...the pill part is fictional...it's basically whats been going through my mind though...the rest is about my break up with the absolute love of my life...i just wish i were better with words so i could let it ALL out...i need constructive critisism lol...leave the love