Just Keep Living

Oh wow..that is the most amazing thing I've ever read. I love how you make a pattern with your writing, like the keep living and just keep writing and stuff..Your so amazingly talented

I love it:) it flows very well. once i started to read it i just could stop reading till the end of the poem:)

First off, thanks for the VERY nice comment! I like your last line, not because it is profound, but because it needs to be said. I have a poem called Cutting Your Life, you may like. I like your style of rhyming poetry...rare to find believe it or not! Good job.
Charisma*

I loved this poem, it flowed well and it was quite inspirational because its true, heartaches do happen in life but you have to keep going...well done xx