Wonder

by Good Enough   Nov 17, 2006


First strike of lightning, first boom of thunder

All this goes on and I still wonder

Will the world come to and end?

Will lies ever be able to bend?

Can true love last forever?

Will the guy in the movie pull the lever?

All these questions need an answer...

For soon I'll know, I'll know the answer.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Your poems are good

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    It's very goOd... The rhyming is perfect... And the questiOns really make One wOnder abOut everything... And thOughful of abOut what the answers cOuld be...

    5/5!
    Keep It Up! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very deep
    touched my heart
    keep it up
    -Lisa

  • 17 years ago

    by Keith

    Short but good :), i like it...
    comment back please...:D

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I noticed this poem wasnt in the usual sadness catagorie and i wanted to read what the poem was about. Anyways the reasen i personally really enjoyed this poem was that it was so... different from your usual style. It has a very varied selection of genres which all of you could of fitted into. The rhymes work and give it this kinda good flow. The first line of this is very straight to the point, it instantly creates this image. Now you put wonder into the next line, it makes me think. You go on to talk about what your wondering, and it makes me think. I want to be on your mind. Want to know whats making you well think like this. You leave the reader hanging at the end, you'll soon know the answer but your not going to tell us. Intresting wya of writing i must say. The repition of; "I'll know" seems to acctually really exagurate the point your making. I know you dont. You know what i mean?? It also got this satisfaction to it. I odnt know. Its an intresting poem. Keep then up. x

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