Comments : As I Am

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    You know, for a while there I thought you were cheating on my dear ol' second dad because it is rare you write love poems....but when you do..I love em hehe!

    This was beautiful I wish I had parents like that..who have a love so strong that can knock over any mountain...excllent write for your hubby mom I love it!
    Chels

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Just amazing. I love reading love poems cos i always try to find ones i can relate to. I especially loved the third stanza, i can definetly (sp?) relate to that one =)
    Fab poem as always from you
    *Gem*

    (And i like to keep the TV on low too at night =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Wonderful dedication to the one you love. Beautiful thoughts and flow.

    Great Job.
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really connected with this poem. I also had a man that was my rock. I lost him over 5yrs ago. Being ill is such a hard thing to carry in your heart and soul alone. I am so glad you have someone there for you. Excellent job on the poem. Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow, this is touching