Wow. That was really good. I loved the pedestal imagery and the repetition was a nice touch. I loved the way you changed perspective halfway through. I was waiting for the fall lol.
gret job 5/5

I thought that it was really good. I like the repitition and the rhythem was really good and it flowed nicely. 5/5

~~Alyson

I love the repitition of this piece-it re-enforces the other lines.The flow is great and the meaning is wonderfully stated.

Gary Jurechka

Good poem, and thanks for your comment it means alot, feel free to read more...GP

Hey thankyou for your comment, it meant a lot. you are right... women can appear weak on the outset but we are strong when we have to be :0)

i really enjoyed this poem, it is unusual and compelling, like if i were you're computer. you write with intelligence and flair.

very good x