Thy Devil.

by Teria   Nov 17, 2006


He prowls the earth looking to devour.
Searching for all week, ready to gain power.
He fills each mind with his devilish ways.
Seeping into all who hide and silently prays.

He buries the truth with rubbish and lies.
Uses good as his fearful, ugly disguise.
He mixes bad and worse obdurate.
Because, his morsel hearts filled with hate.

His hearts too cold to blink a beat.
His mind too corrupted to ever defeat.
His soul is too lost to ever be found.
And his evil inside always surrounds.

Beware of thy devil, he's prowling for you.
Keep your mind and soul covered all the day through.
Use your armor and shield, protect every move.
Or, hell will be the only thing you choose.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. Great word choice and good rhythm. Keep up the great work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, I loved how dark that was! The flow was perfect and the rhyming was great.

    Awesome work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Woww....powerful, but a strange topic though. good job =]
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Great Job! Love the story, and how you described everything, I felt as if I was there...

    Bad News First:

    Searching for all week, ready to gain power.

    What is it because It doesn't make sense... Searching for weeks... or searching for the weak??

    He fills each mind with his devilish ways.
    Seeping into all who hide and silently prays.

    Confusing!

    Maybe try:

    He fills each mind with his devilish way
    Seeping into all who hide and pray
    and
    Or, hell will be the only thing you choose.
    he'll*

    Good News:
    I loved it!! I usually choose which stanzas/lines I love the best... but I just can't choose! Great rhyming, great flow, great story.

    Loved It!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great job by you, ur an amazing writer, keep it up. 5/5

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