That was....dark....
But I like it. It is a completely honest piece and that is why I like it. The flow was excellent and the meaning was powerful. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Another great job by you, ur an amazing writer, keep it up. 5/5

Great Job! Love the story, and how you described everything, I felt as if I was there...

Bad News First:

Searching for all week, ready to gain power.

What is it because It doesn't make sense... Searching for weeks... or searching for the weak??

He fills each mind with his devilish ways.
Seeping into all who hide and silently prays.

Confusing!

Maybe try:

He fills each mind with his devilish way
Seeping into all who hide and pray
and
Or, hell will be the only thing you choose.
he'll*

Good News:
I loved it!! I usually choose which stanzas/lines I love the best... but I just can't choose! Great rhyming, great flow, great story.

Loved It!

5/5

Woww....powerful, but a strange topic though. good job =]
5/5

Wow, I loved how dark that was! The flow was perfect and the rhyming was great.

Awesome work.

Very good poem. Great word choice and good rhythm. Keep up the great work:)