Awwww. I'm glad the little girl found her way home. =]

Oh sorry. Caught up in the story. :)

Great poem. The flow was excellent. The words you chose to use were perfect. Keep it up.

This is sweet. :) I love it! It is perfect and flawless! & about my poem, I know how you feel, I feel that way sometimes but not enough to TOTALLY relate to my poem, lol..anyways, good job!
xoxo

Excellent poem. =D again, u've conveyed so many more words and emotions than what is actually written. =)

in this line:
"The girl gives a sigh"
u should replace 'the girl' with 'she'. just to make the flow better.

just my opinion. =) tho thats the only thing even slightly wrong with the whole thing, 5/5
xxx

You have such a talent for writing! Great poem. I enjoy reading your work.

Thnx for the comment:) i loved this poem. it was really descriptive and good. keep up the great work:) 5/5

This is a very good poem. The emotion really comes through

I like how you can make a poem and not push ryhming words. And your so desriptive it's like your there.
Good Job!