That was so cute! i loved the ending it was strong and nicely worded. for a short one, it was one of the best short ones ive read.
love ya lots,
sore

Awww! i love it! it has wit mixed with cunning, and it makes u think. i love that at first it sounded like a depressing poem, and i was like... "uh, carly, i think u put it in the wrong category..." but then i read the end and i was like, "ha ha ha! COOL!" it also made me read the first part again, which was very clever of you. Bravo!